Thread:Humphry02/@comment-26102520-20150302234551/@comment-26102520-20150303205258

I think you mean "confirmation."

I said why it was awkward:

'''"The two were inseparable, and Anna adored her elder sister" sounds strange since you're adding the last bit almost as if it were an afterthought. Then you have this tiny sentence: "They shared a room and often played together."'''