Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-25389622-20141101150445/@comment-24199126-20150301175334

Sorry, had a crazy number of work hours. I was going to catch up on schoolwork today, but procrastination, am I right? xD

I'll give your sandbox a better look over later, but I will say that the history section seems very choppy. "This happened ... then this." There's not a lot of flow which means there's one of two problems: 1) The writing needs improvement or 2) The writing simply cannot be improved. I feel this is a case of the latter. If you think about it, what the characters do during the course of a song isn't really "song history".

Also, the songs are "in-universe" since the characters really sing them, so we shouldn't mention Kristen Bell/Idina Menzel.

A song's title should be enclosed in quotation marks (a song is essentially a musical poem). Italics are for book/film/show titles.