Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-25389622-20141101150445/@comment-24199126-20141215224202

I think the implied presence of Kristoff and Anna from the previous section is enough. It also does mention "Kristoff", so actually, only Anna is excluded by name. But it mentions Olaf's "companions", so that makes up for that.

The way I see it, detail in the "history" section needs to harmoniously do two things: set the scene and advance plot events. Saying that Olaf was out of shape doesn't advance events in the plot, which concerned with Olaf's attempts to stop Marshmallow. And regarding Olaf falling out the window, again, it doesn't really help advance the events of the story, namely Olaf and Anna escaping from the castle. Now both do contribute to the scene, but they do so in a manner that disrupts flow; for Olaf vs. Marshmallow, the only scene element needed is "cliff". For Olaf and Anna's escape, all that's needed is "window".

That being said, I do agree that the information should be somewhere on the Wiki, but going into that much detail means basically writing out a transcript for the film. The bit about Olaf being arranged incorrectly could go into "abilities", and the bit about the cheerfulness while falling out of a window could go into "personality", but I feel the content present in those sections already adequately describe those features.

AmE stands for American English/Spelling. There were some instances where you used "realised" and "travelled".