Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-25389622-20141101150445/@comment-25389622-20141102180011

Just looked over the edits; I wanted to say that sorry of there are any grammatical errors; I put 'then' instead of 'the' once, and then I keep slipping in to using English convention, like saying 'centre' instead of 'center'. Lot of red; was it just the way I worded things that you changed? As long as the context is still there. I was wondering about this line:

'''The latter is testament to her skill, as when she was scared, the same fountain was formed into a somewhat grotesque form of ice, representing her lack of control over what she was doing. But, when in control, the limits to the beauty of her powers had no limit '''.  Was it unnecessary? It made sense to me. Maybe it's the wording, or was this point already touched upon earlier?

EDIT: Just gave the edits a proper look over; they're pretty good. I love the system we have, it seems to be working :-)