Thread:Dragonboy6491/@comment-25389622-20140907210809/@comment-25389622-20140920191050

I quite enjoyed the trip. It was nice to see the accommodation and leisure facilities. I can just see myself there now :-)

Sorry if I messed around with the Elsa and Citizens of Arendelle Relationship page. It was pretty late and phrases like 'forcefully escorted' and the way I worded how she became unconscious wasn't great. The main reason I went through it was to straighten out the details (like bringing about the point of the page as to what the relationship was at different stages of the film) and also to get rid of the spelling and grammatical errors. There were quite a few for whatever reason. Any I missed were mine after I added my own detail. Also believing herself to be 'just a danger' didn't really make much sense either. I understand that any changes are for the best, as all the pages should always be built upon and developed. I feel bad that you had to take out some big chunks. Did some of it seem irrelevant to the page like describing how the citizens initially reacted to her powers? If I make any more blunders feedback would be appreciated on how I can change my methods and improve my style. Also thanks for putting my images in a gallery. But could they be swapped round to be in chronological order? I'm not too sure how to do that and don't want to break anything :-)



Could you also explain the Changes page and why things are in red or not. I get it why they are on the left side but why the right?

Thanks :-)