Thread:Nicolasmharrison/@comment-44975735-20200529170031

Hello, I've looked through your edits and modified quite a few things.

Most notably I have removed most of the Trivia that you've added because I think that these are either obvious or very random things. Some things were also not true like the fact that Anna had nightmares about Hans. They were about the wolf with a single exception as far as I'm aware.

Second thing are citations. Can you plese cite these few bits that need it?

Last thing is that I reverted some of the interpretation in the stories of characters as I believe them to be less accurate than what was there before.

Trivia on the Forest of Shadows page also seems like quite obvious things but I'm not done with the book yet. 