Thread:Heimr Arnadalr/@comment-25389622-20150409170855/@comment-26102520-20150416033056

We do need to specify some, but in no way do we need to mention every action. So long as key parts are identified, other content can be removed since it simply isn't needed. I'm not the only one who thinks this; looking over Dragonboy's edits, he's trimmed down the pages quite a bit.

There may not be focus on the character's view, but delving into very precise details about the character's actions draws focus away from the event, which is supposed to have a broader look.

A prelude isn't an introduction in the sense that you're thinking. A prelude describes what happened before another event, so it can be as long or short as need be.

Sorry, I missed the question...yes, I've seen the short. Though whether I've seen it or not doesn't affect me correcting the additions that have been made regarding Frozen Fever. As far as my activity levels, I'm graduating soon and have made it into grad school, so I don't give a crap about anything right now ;)