Thread:Oritsuki/@comment-44975735-20200625195103

I feel like I wasn't explicit enough in the edit summary so I'll write here as well.

The quote "the sky [was] awake" has to have the brackets to highlight that it's not the exact wording. Also the quote can't be "the sky is awake", which is the exact wording, because that's not past tense and it wouldn't go well with the rest of the sentece.

I hope my explenation is understandable. 