Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-25389622-20141101150445/@comment-24199126-20150111025421

6. Heh, well everyone fell for it. Guess their fears of Elsa's just became too much at that point. Regarding Hans' potential bloodthirst, it's not too much of a stretch since Jennifer Lee says Hans is a sociopath, and a hallmark of sociopathic behavior is sadism. But most importantly, removing the "in triumph" is a true compromise as neither party walks away successful :P

8. Wary is taken care of by the next sentence where he warns the guards to be on guard.

9. Possessive form =/= possession. I still don't see what's wrong with using "his troops". Is this why you changed it from battalion to troop, even though that was perfectly correct? I'd like to use a Clash of Clans example btw, since it fits so well with this. In the game, you can give troops to your friends and vice-versa. However, donated troops are still considered part of YOUR army :P. Sounds weird for me to use this as an example, but there you have it.