Thread:Humphry02/@comment-26102520-20150404022151/@comment-26102520-20150404022935

Fluff: Not getting to the point, e.g. Saying, "Olaf thought Marshmallow was having a bad day, going as far as to pity him" instead of "Olaf thought Marshmallow was having a bad day and pitied him." Boom. It FLOWS because it's clear, and it's clear because it's concise. Encyclopedic writing doesn't involve beating around the bush; it involves getting straight to the information. When you change good wording to something else, I can only conclude one of two things: Either you don't understand flow, or you're making edits for the heck of it.

If you REALLY want to see an example of poor flow, think back to our edit war.