Thread:Dragonboy6491/@comment-25389622-20140907210809/@comment-24199126-20140921005723

Glad you had a good time at your University open day :)

As for the page, you did a really good job of refining it; my changes really were just minor. Fear not, since I didn't take out that much. What I did was space out the article so it wouldn't be one wall of text. Unfortunately, when you compare changes, it looks like a lot was removed; however, if you look at the size difference, I only removed 65 bytes of information out of 2600 :). For the most part, your changes are intact aside from just minor grammatical fixes and syntax changes I made so do not despair, you are doing well :D. I've also switched the images to be in chronological order; good suggestion :).

The red on the left shows what parts of the original have been altered. The red on the right reflects the new changes. So because of my spacing, it just looked like the entire block of text was changed heavily xD.