Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-25389622-20141101150445/@comment-24199126-20150108005322

I meant they are similar in writing style, but they're still different in tense usage. And I don't see why not. It's information like anything else :)

Yep, my line of thinking precisely.

Hmmm, all right I'll merge the dignitary pages when I rewrite them to standard. I removed the section largely because it repeated what was already in the history section, not that it was written badly. And they didn't go full on hysterical like the Duke, but there's no denying they were alarmed when Elsa blasted the Duke; we need only see the woman backing away with her baby.

It did come out wrong, but even if I amend the statement to "Initially shocked by Elsa's powers, the citizens realized their beauty during a day of ice skating", it's still unsubstantial. Furthermore, this is Elsa's page, so it needs to focus on her. That statement only reveals what the citizens felt about Elsa, not the other way around.

Oh you meant that. All right, I'll keep fiddling with that and see what happens.

Um who's Rockwell? If it's from the book where you found Soren, I can't help because ... I don't have it.

EDIT: Finished up the dignitaries, so feel free to check my work :)