Thread:Heimr Arnadalr/@comment-25389622-20150409170855/@comment-26102520-20150415165035

Focusing too much on characters = adding details like "grief-stricken Elsa" and "collapsed onto the ice in despair." That's about Elsa, not the event. Same goes for your recent edits about Elsa escaping out onto the fjord and Anna seeing Hans about to kill Elsa. Those are not details important to the event and are merely bits of character history.

Who said a prelude had to be short? A prelude merely introduces what's to come. Nowhere in that definition is "short" a requirement.