Thread:Heimr Arnadalr/@comment-25389622-20150409170855/@comment-25389622-20150414204627

We also need to be clear on what "focusing too much on the characters" is. Between my old paragraph and your new edit, I see very little that has changed in this respect. And I also thought that the prelude was supposed to be fairly short. It seems as though you have said what I have said only in more words...