Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-25389622-20141101150445/@comment-24199126-20141119010606

Okay let me see ...

All right so the first section, I kept mostly the same; it was just a slight reword. I did specify Elsa only met with the French and Spanish dignitaries though.

Second part: I removed the bit about Hans trying to find Anna b/c it wasn't pertinent to Elsa's relationship with them. I kept the bit about them helping Hans through the winter b/c without that part, the rest wouldn't make sense.

Third part: I removed the bit about Anna punching Hans since again, it doesn't deal with Elsa and her relationship with the dignitaries.

Aside from that, I kept the structure of your addition and it certainly was well done :).