Thread:WarGrowlmon18/@comment-44975735-20200512141205

Hello. I've looked at your recent edits and while they are great, there are a few things that are not right.

First thing is past tense. You wrote various things in present tense while they should be in past tense. For example on Olaf's page, you wrote that Olaf looses his weakness but it should say that he lost his weakness because it's something that happened instead of something that's happening continously.

Second thing is that when writing stories of places or characters, you also seem to write about related event in more detail than what's necessary. For example when writing about the wave on Arendelle, it's not needed to say that breaking the dam freed the Enchanted forest.

Third thing is Trivia. As the name suggests, it should contain things that are not obvious. Again done to not clutter the section.

I won't check the Legacies because I'm not really familiar with what's supposed and not supposed to be there. 