Thread:Heimr Arnadalr/@comment-25389622-20150409170855/@comment-25389622-20150415231013

OK, looking at the piece, you simply can't get away from talking about the characters and their actions, seeing as they are what lead the event. You could argue that the Great Thaw is spoken about enough on the character pages; this is the event page, so yes, it is the thawing of Arendelle, but this is initiated by Elsa, and it is Anna who is needed to bring this about, so we need to specify some character history. The part about "Hans striking down Elsa" made it sound as though she was standing; she was already on the floor so surely it is best to specify that, else the information is fragmented. It is also necessary to the article to mention things like Elsa escaping; how do we know that she's out on the ice otherwise?

I tried with the other articles, but you are always going to talk about characters and their history. Some bits still need refining, though I'm not sure as to what degree. Bear in mind that it is more about perspective, as in we are not talking from any particular characters' point of view. Neither are these articles focusing on one character, unless of course with something like the Great Thaw, then it's obviously going to have to refer to Elsa to a large degree because she is the one who directly caused the event.

The prelude is an introduction; we are setting the scene. You don't need to go into huge detail about previous events (the page is focusing on one event in particular) nor do you need the go into great detail about subjects that will be spoken about in the article.

I'm not trying to argue, just trying to make sure that we know where we are going with this.

Are you going to say whether you have seen the short? I just wanted to know that and also about books to give me an idea to see if you are helpful for adding material to other sections. I will do the same with everyone else. It's just I think that a few of us are taking some time out for exams and revision. I don't know about your situation, but it'd be nice so that we have a heads-up :-)