Thread:Blue99White/@comment-24199126-20140417124143

Hello Blue99White :)

I see you've already started making quite a few edits like adding pictures, which is good for improving the aesthetics of the pages :D.

But I've noticed you make a lot of minor edits where you remove the paragraph format of a page and turn it into one giant wall of text. Please refrain from doing this as this hurts not only the look of the page but also makes it more difficult to read since there is a lack of organization. Paragraphs are meant to be there to show deviations in thought or description.

For instance, I've spaced out this message to deliver two ideas to you, the first thanking you for the edits and the second criticizing an aspect of your work. It wouldn't make sense to put those two ideas in the same block of text right?

Other than that, keep on contributing :) 