Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-25389622-20141101150445/@comment-25389622-20150117004958

1) Fine

2) Cool

3) Your version sounds better :-)

4) That works, definitely.

5) They weren't "cracks" as such; it would be better to say that the walls and floor became frosted - they aren't all clear and reflective like they were. I also noticed that the walls and floor in the foyer were scratched/cracked, perhaps due to the palace's shifting nature (?) Also, I never meant that they were weaknesses in the structure.

Oh, and maybe we should consider including the bit about icy shadows.

6) I agree



<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">7) Yeah, that's fine too :-)