Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-25389622-20141101150445/@comment-24199126-20150116015815

So going to explain my edits here since "Rewording for flow + removing redundancies" isn't all that descriptive.

1) "Without bringing harm to others" is more concise.

2) Tautology: "... demonstrate the true power that she possessed" is saying the same thing as "tested the limits of her abilities". If we say one, there's no need to say the other.

3) Just sounded awkward. Also, felt like the sentences were related enough that a semi-colon would be better.

4) Where it says "Venturing inside alone ..." I just shifted that sentence down since it deals more with the following paragraph.

5) Where it says "Alone once more...", I just shifted this sentence down since it is good enough to be its own paragraph. I did remove the bit about the cracks distorting the palace since I don't recall seeing weaknesses in the palace's structure. We hear cracks but the ice spikes produced them.

6) I'm aware the arrow shot through the support of the chandelier, but it's part of the chandelier nonetheless. Since the wording is right either way, concision takes precedence since it's less clunky.

7) The North Mountain is mentioned above as the setting for the palace, so just "the mountain range" is good enough. Also, saying "the mountain range where the North Mountain is situated" sounds awkward.

Also went through the Arendelle page.