Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-25389622-20141101150445/@comment-25389622-20141215205804

Just regarding your amendments.

I think that saying "Olaf and Sven went their separate ways" ("helping Anna") isn't enough detail; it implies that it was just Olaf and Sven in the scene, and not Anna and Kristoff. It would be OK if you said that Kristoff and Anna were riding Sven prior. I know that it says that they are riding him in the previous paragraph, but so was Olaf, and he got off. It just didn't seemed explicit enough to me. Could we also talk about "how much" detail we go into. My trouble is that I can ramble on and put in every tiny detail, which isn't necessary for an encyclopedia, or at least in the "History" section; everything should be included across the Wiki somewhere. The two main bits were that when Olaf runs from Marshmallow, he is not back together properly. Should we say that? And the bit where he nearly falls out of the window? It kind of adds to the point about his somewhat cheery nature, even in that kind of environment. Maybe it could go under "Personality"?

Also, what's "AmE"?

