Thread:BlouseGirl/@comment-24199126-20141204171407/@comment-27934123-20141206104105

Sorry for the late reply, and yes, I did manage to check it out and I don't see anything wrong with it or whether or not it needs a little bit of tinkering, but it's definitely missing something. Rather, I just don't know what yet. Maybe you could work on the full draft first? I'll check back to you when I have some ideas.