Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-25389622-20141101150445/@comment-24199126-20150210224510

I don't mind the change, but it needs proper reasoning. Having an "in-universe" category hardly justifies changing "real world" to "out-of-universe" because, as stated, it's nothing more than an OCD issue. The term "real world" itself is sound, so it's hardly "necessary" to change it. And I meant going into every article and changing something like "a horse" to "a single horse"; the change is not wrong, but there was no reason to change it in the first place.

Aside from adding extra details, your rewrites have been fine. Just remember to focus on the location. If you find yourself saying "Character did this" too much, you're deviating from what the article should be about.